Making comments on Google Plus Communities ...

As a school, we have moved towards using Google Plus Communities as a method for students to share their work and to give feedback to each other. This doubles the impact of the work for the students as they are having to think about the work again to give quality feedback. In an effort to support them to give quality feedback, I was asked to come up with a graphic that could highlight the main points.
( This also gave me an excuse to give my new iPad app, AstroPad, a good try out with Photoshop. )